this is good – I always wanted to know, as I wrote 3 years ago lols?
The Light of the dark path that you saw in the sky, Shining true and bright, bright, fluorescent, hikers tired, diamonds magic instant, returning to life when night comes. A cape glitter dust, shimmering in its beautiful light, to be held and carried by the endless sky, a gift for Queen wonderful night. Campfires of powerful gods above, the fall and leaving streaks of light to follow. A guide for people who are only speeding far as the sun rises, leaving in need themselves, awaiting the return of the star to shine for their fate.
I think your poem is beautiful. I have a suggestion if I may? The sentences are to be poetic in the appropriate placement for easy reading. May I? The path you have the light, across the sky, Shining true and clear, bright, fluorescent, for weary hikers. Diamonds twinkling magic to come …. to life when the night arrives. A cap dust glitter, shimmering … in its magnificent light, to be held and carried by the endless sky. A gift for the wonderful … Queen of the night. … Campfires of powerful gods above. Falling … and leaving trails of light. forward. … A guide for people who are alone. moving away … when the sun rises, leaving in need … by themselves, waiting. Of the return of star-shine,,, ….. their fate. This is a opinion, if not to your liking, ok, but the poem is great as it is. Continue to write. Thank you for sharing.
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